I think the way you approached this claim really highlights each aspect of the evidence provided in the original article, as well as the articles you provided. The evidence also being from reliable sources only helps with adding to the credibility of your argument. I liked the way you emphasized that the term "breathing" was a metaphor rather than a fact; because, it can sometimes be misleading when approaching certain claims with words that seem out of place. I also appreciated you highlighting the scientists credibility to make sure the original source was accurate.