I agree, there is truth to the claim, however it fails to highlight that success is never guaranteed, higher education simply gives people the tools to reach success easier. Your point about college increasing chances of success without guaranteeing it is well-taken. To strengthen this argument, consider adding specific statistics, like from the U.S. Bureau of Labor Statistics. It might be worth mentioning that for every Steve Jobs, there are thousands of successful entrepreneurs and executives who did complete college degrees. A balanced view could acknowledge both paths to success.