You have made a great point that I have investigated myself but I do believe that you should expand more on why this is true and also include some sources that you have used to make this statement true not only from Fox 26. I would also expand on the Fox 26 article and what they have stated through this investigation and what were the ending results that they have found. I would included the articles that you have used so others that read your statement could look at those websites and see if you statement is true with what those websites had to say about it.