I really like that you referenced Harvard Health as your source that adds credibility. However, I noticed a few points that could use clarification. First, the statement that “dark chocolate contains about 70% cocoa” isn’t always true that percentage can vary widely by brand and product. It might help to specify that chocolates with at least 70% cocoa content are typically considered “dark” and offer the most health benefits. Also, the study you mentioned suggests a correlation, but not necessarily causation. Lastly, you mention that dark chocolate contains “not as much” sugar as milk chocolate, which is true in general, but even dark chocolate can still have a high sugar content depending on the brand. Maybe next time, linking to or comparing a nutrition label would strengthen your point.